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still.breathing · 16.11.2006, 19:36

You left me behind.
I broke into pieces.
Since you´ve been gone,
I´m a shadow of mine.

Nothing matters to me,
Life´s passing by.
I don´t attend it.
Because without you I can´t live,
Without you, I can´t breathe,
I cannot sleep at night.
Still praying it might be a dream
But it´s real.

You slipped away.
I didn´t say goodbye.
How could I have known
It´s the last time
I´ve ever seen you?

My soul´s in twain,
My heart´s feeling empty.
I´m lonely, I´m alone.
I won´t ever love someone
As I did love you

Love will never leave you,
As long as I live.
I keep you in mind,
Wherever I go, whatever I do.

Ex Darkskin · 16.11.2006, 19:52

Zitat:

Original von still.breathing
Since you been gone,

muss heissen
"Since you`ve been gone"

Zitat:

Original von still.breathing
How could I have known

muss heissen
"How could I know"

Das sind nur die gröbsten. Ich würde es nochmal überarbeiten, das Englisch.

Gruss

Darkskin

still.breathing · 16.11.2006, 20:21

Danke für den Tipp.

16.11.2006, 19:36	#1
still.breathing Dabei seit: 11/2006 Beiträge: 9 Meine Gedichte	Left alone You left me behind. I broke into pieces. Since you´ve been gone, I´m a shadow of mine. Nothing matters to me, Life´s passing by. I don´t attend it. Because without you I can´t live, Without you, I can´t breathe, I cannot sleep at night. Still praying it might be a dream But it´s real. You slipped away. I didn´t say goodbye. How could I have known It´s the last time I´ve ever seen you? My soul´s in twain, My heart´s feeling empty. I´m lonely, I´m alone. I won´t ever love someone As I did love you Love will never leave you, As long as I live. I keep you in mind, Wherever I go, whatever I do.

16.11.2006, 20:21	#3
still.breathing Dabei seit: 11/2006 Beiträge: 9 Meine Gedichte	Danke für den Tipp.