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12.10.2011, 18:11
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Look At The Sky (Songtext)
Look At The Sky
Look at the sky It isn’t gray It’s full of stars that shine so bright They let you know you’re not alone There`s always someone at your site The falling rain will wash away All your sorrows all your pains And after rain the sun will shine Bright she leads you to new day Look at your life It isn’t wrong It’s full of beauty lies beneath You have to see and to believe That you don’t have to live alone The falling rain will wash away All your sorrows all your pains And after rain the sun will shine Bright she leads you to new day Look at your heart It isn`t dead It’s full of love that never shown You don´t have to be afraid of this Just show it and you’ll get it back The falling rain will wash away All your sorrows all your pains And after rain the sun will shine Bright she leads you to new day |
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12.10.2011, 20:10
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14.10.2011, 12:18
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CDP hat recht, dass SE passt el nullo totalo:
Look at the sky It ain't just gray but full of stars so bright which let u feel u’ not alone just always someone at your side. site bedeutet den platz/stelle eines geschehens: the site of the murder...accident...ect...und wenn du reimst, dann passen sky und grey natürlich nicht. muss aber auch nicht sein, denn lyrics für einen song setzen die versform nicht zwingend... |
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14.10.2011, 12:34
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Danke für die Tipps. Ich schreibe noch nicht allzu lange englische Lyrics und kann mich in dieser Sprachen dementsprechend noch nicht so gut ausdrücken wie auf deutsch. Ich werd versuchen den Song noch zu verbessern.
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14.10.2011, 13:09
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ja super, liebes mädchen.
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15.10.2011, 11:39
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Ich hab gestern noch ein wenig dran gearbeitet. Hoffe es ist nun besser
 Look at the sky Look at the sky It is not gray But full of stars shining so bright Which let you feel you’re not alone There’s always someone at your side. The falling rain will wash away All your sorrows all your pains And after rain the sun will shine Bright she leads you to new day Look at your life It is not wrong But full of beauty lies beneath You have to see and to believe That there is more than hopelessness The falling rain will wash away All your sorrows all your pains And after rain the sun will shine Bright she leads you to new day Look at your heart It is not dead But full of love that never shown Don´t be afraid, pick up courage Just show it and you’ll get it back The falling rain will wash away All your sorrows all your pains And after rain the sun will shine Bright she leads you to new day |
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