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02.01.2006, 22:25 | #1 |
The feeling I have
I met you a week ago
can't stop thinking about you You're spinning in my head it makes me crazy, can hardly sleep even think of you when I'm in bed. Thinking about next time Ask myself, when will it be... You're in my thoughts, and in my mind, for me it is hard to admit, the feelings I have... so this is how you'll know... I really fell in love so. Lilly |
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02.01.2006, 23:22 | #2 |
Die Wortwahl hat so einen schönen Klang von der Naivität. Ehrlich und irgendwie sehr ängstlich, zurückhaltend und vorsichtig...der hastende Rhythmus passt schön dazu.
Die Stimmung ist sehr leise, ein melancholisches Solo-piano Stücke würden jetzt dazu passen. Gefällt mir. |
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03.01.2006, 12:40 | #3 |
RE: The feeling I have
Genauso war's gemeint... Dankeschön.
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03.01.2006, 18:39 | #4 |
abgemeldet
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RE: The feeling I have
hello darling,
remember me ? I left my bellybuttom and my hooters in your bedroom, in case you found both of them ? please take good care, I will see you very soon again. see you later alicator, [ mein suesses krokodilien ] |
03.01.2006, 22:55 | #5 |
RE: The feeling I have
Very sweet! But I can't really remember... and I have a very good memory! *smile*
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