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08.08.2009, 12:00 | #1 |
Dabei seit: 08/2009
Ort: Würzburg
Alter: 30
Beiträge: 1
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Perfect (Dreams just don't come true)
All I ever wanted was just you
But now I know that dreams just don't come true But you were perfect, perfect to me To me you were perfect I dreamed this dream every night and day No matter if you were here or miles away I dreamed this dream about us every time I dreamed of me being yours, and you being mine Cause you were perfect, perfect to me To me you were perfect I dreamed this dream every day and night And sometimes it seemed just right Seemed you would finally see I dreamed this dream of you loving me Cause you were perfect, perfect to me To me you were perfect I didn't care what you do Didn't care what you say Didn't care 'bout your friends I just hoped someday I'd be everything that you want Cause you were perfect, perfect to me To me you were perfect But I saw you with her Walking down the street You were holding her hand And I looked at my feet I tried to smile at you As you were looking at me But you didn't smile back Cos you never wanted us to be And now I see I was such a fool to believe Now I see That dreams just don't come true Oh dreams just don't come true But you were perfect, perfect to me To me you were perfect. Also wenn es jemanden interessiert, es geht um einen Jungen, in den ich mal verliebt war, der nichts von mir wissen wollte. Merkt man wahrscheinlich. Ich glaub nich, dass es gut ist oder so, aber ich würd gern mal wissen, wie ihr des so findet, ich freue mich über jede angemessene Kritik Danke schonmal! |
14.08.2009, 18:37 | #2 |
Dabei seit: 04/2009
Alter: 30
Beiträge: 7
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Schön
Also ich finde dein Lied sehr schön und ich finde es auch gut das man in über seine erlbenisse erzählt
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15.08.2009, 03:25 | #3 | |
Dabei seit: 08/2009
Ort: Heidenheim
Alter: 34
Beiträge: 3
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Zitat:
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12.09.2009, 18:46 | #4 |
Dabei seit: 08/2008
Alter: 32
Beiträge: 18
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find es echt gelungen!
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24.11.2009, 23:19 | #5 |
Dabei seit: 11/2009
Ort: Zwischen den Welten...
Alter: 29
Beiträge: 37
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Also ich finde das echt gut! Solltest du mal vieleicht nach jemandem suchen, der das vertonen kann...
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25.11.2009, 23:04 | #6 |
Dabei seit: 07/2009
Ort: In meiner eigenen Welt...
Alter: 34
Beiträge: 1.157
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Hmm...
Ich weis nicht so recht. Einerseits ist es wirklich gut, aber andererseits wirkt es auf mich ziemlich kitschig, weis auch nicht. |
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