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das ist mein erstes fremdsprachiges gedicht. ich hab es gestern in den 9. Stunde (Latein, bähh!) verfasst und seitdem nichtmehr angerührt. Sagen wir mal, es ist noch eine "Rohfassung"...
I need you Why I´m feeling so blue Everytime I´m thinking of you? It´s difficult to understand, Sometimes life doesn´t make sense. I think of you both day and night Or anytime you´re out of my sight. Standing here on the world ends shore, I know I can´t live without you anymore. Kissing you. Missing you. You are so close but also far away And I´m praying for you to stay With me. Can´t you see? You´re a part of who I am It´s a damn Destiny, we are fancy-free, Aren´t we? So I´m closing this letter Hoping we will live some time in a better Life together, filled with joy and happyness, May you are blessed. Wie gesagt, 9.Stunde, das merkt man schon (ganz kurz vorm einschlafen*lol*) |
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Eine Frage: sollte es nicht "may you be blessed" heissen? Des Gedicht gefällt mir sonst ganz gut...
Lilly |
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Ich habs nochmal etwas umgeschrieben...ein paar worte geändert und so...
I need you Why I´m feeling so blue Every time I´m thinking of you? It´s difficult to understand, Sometimes life doesn´t make sense. I think of you both day and night Or anytime you´re out of my sight. Standing here on the world ends shore, I know I can´t live without you anymore. Kissing you. Missing you. You are so close but also far away And I´m praying for you to stay With me. Can´t you see? You´re a part of who I am, Damn! We are free, Aren´t we? So I´m closing this letter Hoping we will live some time in a better Life together, filled with joy and happyness, May we will be blessed. Ich denk mal,jetz klappts auch mit der grammatik besser... |
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