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01.02.2008, 18:41 | #1 |
** You're just liek a drug **
Haii ihr Lieben, hier noch ein Gedicht.. ;o)
You're just like a drug [written by Mia] There’s so much that I love about you There’s so much that makes me smile about you There’s so much that I think about you There’s so much that makes me wanna die You’re just like a drug I’m obsessed Can’t get away from you And everytime I’m thinking about you I would like to scream Everytime I think about you my heart is hurting Sometimes I just wanna die Because I think I can’t live my life along like this because my heart is bleeding too much But then I think If I'd die now How many hearts would bleed then? You’re just like a drug I’m obsessed Can’t get away from you And everytime I’m thinking about you I would like to scream And at the moment I feel like you ignore me Do you know what I feel for you? Or do you just have to do enough With this lil' bit*h I think I should get out of here where I can be happy again where I can forget my nightmarish obsession where I can forget you but sometimes I just think I wouldn't survive this It's like a bad dream I'm crying here I thought it would be great to spend time with you but now I wish I had never met you You’re just like a drug I’m obsessed Can’t get away from you And everytime I’m thinking about you I would like to scream [13/14 Jan 08] Freu mich über Kritik, Lob und/oder Verbesserungsvorschläge ;o) |
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02.02.2008, 17:02 | #2 |
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02.02.2008, 17:27 | #3 |
hi mia,
entschuldige die nachfrage, aber welchen zweck verfolgen die "**" im titel? die stoßen mich ehrlich gesagt schon im vornherein ab, da sie selten gutes verheißen. die inhaltlich scheintote erste strophe bestätigt meine befürchtungen. nichts für ungut, ich kann mit deinem text lyrisch nichts anfangen. gruß maxim |
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