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25.07.2015, 18:12 | #1 |
the well and god and eternal life
25.7.2015
~ there was an old man who wanted to find eternal life other men said he had to sit with God at a well that if you sat with God at a well you would not age anymore and they said with a smile, they had never heard of someone dying who did this the old man took them serious and left for a well he found one in the corner of a market place, and it was a beautiful old well he sat down at the well and decided to stay there then he prayed and God said, yes, I will stay here too it was a beautiful day.. the next day the man went to the well again and God seemed to already be there and greet him with a broad smile the old man chuckled and said to himself, this is a good start and God spoke kindly to this man and loved him and what God said, the man pondered and in the love of God, the old man felt peace God told so many things to the old man that he was happy it was a good day.. the next day the man went to the well again and after an hour he thought of a girl he once loved a girl that lived in another town now and got married and she was surely busy and had no time for him after another hour he thought of a woman he had once met in summer a woman that he hadn't seen again and he did not know where she lived at that point the old man decided that he needed some wine the well and God were not enough it was not a bad day.. the next day the man went to the well again he had some wine with him, and the sneaking suspicion that neither god nor the well were enough to keep him happy but it was still remarkable, he sat at the well and talked with God only that day, in the evening, he found that he desired to visit another country he dreamt of beautiful places he had not seen yet of meeting good and remarkable people he had not known yet at that point the old man decided that he needed some tobacco the well and God were not enough it was not such a great day.. the next day the man went to the well again he had some wine and tobacco with him as he arrived at the well he saw a foreigner, a new marketender girl sit there she said, i am a lover of yours, I know you since you were fourteen years old I dreamt and hoped and aged with you now I am here to tell you that this well and not even God mean eternal life for to have eternal life you need a lover and you need to be able to leave the here and arrive in the there the well and God are not enough.. it was an enlightening day.. the next day nobody saw the man at the well again the water boys took water from the well the doves flew around its roof to coo some people noticed an absence and some knew what happened, and others not the well was still there but the old man was gone, and it seemed like his god had gone too perhaps they went away together it still smelled after tobacco for a day, and in the corner was laying a broken bottle of wine the well and God are never enough for more than a few days in a row.. |
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26.07.2015, 11:09 | #2 |
R.I.P.
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hallo gelberhund
es kommt selten vor, dass ich einen so langen text am bildschirm zu ende lese. es gab nur vier oder fünf zeilen, die ich nicht mochte. alles übrige gefiel mir sehr. nachdenklich: was gäbe dieser text auf deutsch her? ich denke: viel. sitting by my well I wonder if it should not be sufficient for today gruss urluberlu |
26.07.2015, 11:15 | #3 |
Braucht es die Verssetzung? Es hat doch mehr Charakter einer Erzählung als eines Gedichts.
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26.07.2015, 11:41 | #4 |
R.I.P.
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a) Ganz klar: Ja.
b) Ganz klar: Nein. u. |
26.07.2015, 12:20 | #5 |
Man kann es auch als Erzählung schreiben, aber das ist gar nicht so einfach. Versuchts aber falls es euch zufällt. Ich gebe meinen Texten bewußt kein Copyright.
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26.07.2015, 19:25 | #6 |
It's not always the eternity we pursue for, remember there are always things left to do. Radiant things we haven't seen yet, splendid things we haven't heared yet. Live your life to the fullest, Eternity can wait.
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