Who I am bei Poetry.de

lemsuzz · 30.10.2009, 18:08

I´m ugly and pretty at the same time,
I´m thirty years old, while I´m nine,
I´m man and woman, father and son,
I´m boy and girl, brother, sister,
I´m well behaved and I´m a twister,
I´m the clouds and I´m the sun.

I´m neat, I´m tidy, I´m a mess,
I don´t know who I am, just guess,
I hate brown and I hate blue,
Perhaps I´ll try,
Beeing shy,
But I have so much left to do.

I´m special, ordinary, average,
I´m homeless, poor, although I´m rich,
I´m alive, I´m almost dead,
There is the one thing: I´m a fool,
I´m unpopular, I´m cool,
I´m the end of the thread.

I love the world, hate everything,
I´m the queen and I´m the king,
I don´t like, who I am,
Although I can.
Well, my life is ugly.
But I am, who I am. Just me - Nobody.

--lemsuzz--

Sonja · 30.10.2009, 18:33

Dear lemsuzz,
nobody is a NOBODY!

Your peom is very nice an very sad together.
It makes me smile and a little bit sad at the same time.

God Job!

I hope this is written right!

Trauerschwan · 30.10.2009, 19:50

Wirklich nicht schlecht geschrieben!

Erinnert mich bisschen an das Lied "You gotta be" von Des'ree....

Finds grade net bei youtube...

Tolles Gedicht!

lemsuzz · 30.10.2009, 23:03

Well, I often (actually always) do übertreiben a bit...

Und who in alla welt is Des´ree?

Liebe Grüße lemsuzz

30.10.2009, 18:08	#1
lemsuzz Dabei seit: 10/2009 Ort: Über den Wolken Alter: 27 Beiträge: 30 Meine Gedichte	Who I am I´m ugly and pretty at the same time, I´m thirty years old, while I´m nine, I´m man and woman, father and son, I´m boy and girl, brother, sister, I´m well behaved and I´m a twister, I´m the clouds and I´m the sun. I´m neat, I´m tidy, I´m a mess, I don´t know who I am, just guess, I hate brown and I hate blue, Perhaps I´ll try, Beeing shy, But I have so much left to do. I´m special, ordinary, average, I´m homeless, poor, although I´m rich, I´m alive, I´m almost dead, There is the one thing: I´m a fool, I´m unpopular, I´m cool, I´m the end of the thread. I love the world, hate everything, I´m the queen and I´m the king, I don´t like, who I am, Although I can. Well, my life is ugly. But I am, who I am. Just me - Nobody. --lemsuzz--

30.10.2009, 18:33	#2
Sonja Dabei seit: 07/2009 Ort: In meiner eigenen Welt... Alter: 33 Beiträge: 1.157 Meine Gedichte	Dear lemsuzz, nobody is a NOBODY! Your peom is very nice an very sad together. It makes me smile and a little bit sad at the same time. God Job! I hope this is written right!

30.10.2009, 19:50	#3
Trauerschwan Dabei seit: 10/2009 Ort: Ich wohne am kleinsten Ende Thüringens. Alter: 33 Beiträge: 28 Meine Gedichte	Wirklich nicht schlecht geschrieben! Erinnert mich bisschen an das Lied "You gotta be" von Des'ree.... Finds grade net bei youtube... Tolles Gedicht!

30.10.2009, 23:03	#4
lemsuzz Dabei seit: 10/2009 Ort: Über den Wolken Alter: 27 Beiträge: 30 Meine Gedichte	Well, I often (actually always) do übertreiben a bit... Und who in alla welt is Des´ree? Liebe Grüße lemsuzz