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Internationale Gedichte Sämtliche nicht-deutschsprachige Gedichte. |
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04.01.2010, 20:22 | #1 |
Thinking in close-ups
Melting something close
on the edge of the the not yet finished thoughts on minds. Spreading out and running down, as if water could help us now and standing on darkening moss in forests and wet grounds, feeling nothing touch through shoes but everything like a close-up to our eyes. (a small "thanks" to the inspiring comments of movfaltin) |
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17.01.2010, 23:40 | #2 |
If only I had a scooby what words still remain to be said on my behalf?
Ah, got it: a huge thank you for this poem of yours (as for all the others, at least the English-speaking ones). There is one image included which I really like: the replacement of (well, in a way superficial) haptics by close-up (remote? deeper?) watching. I do not know whether this meets your intentions, but - a great idea anyway.(However, I would have thought of rubber boots instead due to the moisture dripping all through your poem.) Cheers, |
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18.01.2010, 17:26 | #3 | |
Your are welcome it`s yours.
Zitat:
Greetings, Isabel |
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