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Internationale Gedichte Sämtliche nicht-deutschsprachige Gedichte. |
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18.02.2024, 14:31 | #1 |
beware
I am
ever-lasting ever-changing I am the amoeba silently cruising through your system you don't feel me yet you shake I am the bat silently landing in your hair you don’t see me yet you scream I am the snake silently slithering across your feet you see me you feel me you turn to ice with panic I am the bear nuzzling your throat near the carotid fondly whispering you smile and succumb to my embrace I am ever-changing ever-lasting beware |
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25.02.2024, 21:38 | #2 |
When I try to summarize it, nature makes itself more and more noticeable. The animals (amoebas aren't really animals, but however) are getting bigger and deadlier. Nature is ever-changing and ever-lasting and in the end always the winner. I like the message and the poem as it is.
Greetings, Lee |
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26.02.2024, 13:19 | #3 |
That, yes. Bur also: the LI changes masks all the time, disguising him/herself, being most dangerous when sweet-talking instead of being silent. All the more reason to be wary whom you succumb to.
Thankyou, Lee Berta, for reading and commenting. LI ftatateeta |
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26.02.2024, 14:06 | #4 |
Forumsleitung
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In the hero's journey, those appearances are referred to as "tricksters". It's not common to give them, at the samte time, the part of the protagonist. Therefore, I think that the real protagonist of the poem is the person the trickster is apporaching.
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26.02.2024, 23:23 | #5 | |
Zitat:
Greetings, Lee |
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