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12.02.2022, 12:44 | #1 |
beautiful, fragile flower
she was a rose
in the hand of those who had no intention of giving her undivided attention. for how pure, beautiful, flawless she looks, she is. truly cold-hearted and careless they are, this is - having to watch a rose wither without anyone to consider, keeping an eye on and protecting with a forceful hand. with your bordeaux red petals growing, undoubtedly aestethically pleasing. your blossom- to feel, extremely soft and enjoyable your stem- to touch, incredibly painful and horrible. you‘re unbelievably sensitive, not one single per cent primitive. huge dose of elegance with your very own fragrance - smelling so indescribeable, irrevocably desirable. tu es magnifique, fleur. believe me, ma belle rose, keep in mind, do always remember - don‘t let anybody tell you different, do not, never ever, surrender. remarkable combination, assured to stay in commemoration. |
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26.02.2022, 10:53 | #2 |
Good morning resmagnifica,
"she was a rose" and hopefully will be remembered fondly. Keep up your lyrical creativity!
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13.09.2022, 21:25 | #3 |
Hey resmagnifica,
I was catched by your title first, and then even more by your beautiful, sad but still true words in your poem. You used extraordinary language but yet quite understandable words for not native speakers. Words full of meaning and magic. I thank you for this great work! You're pretty talented! |
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