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22.04.2021, 10:13 | #1 |
there's something wrong with your head
you know there's something wrong with your head
when underweight won't seem light enough yet you know there's something wrong with your head when you cry as soon as you get into bed you know there's something wrong with your head when waking up makes you feel only dread you know there's something wrong with your head when you'd love to be dead, but you're not brave enough yet you know there's something wrong with your head but you're afraid to get help, so you lie instead and say you're fine, while you hang on a thread |
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22.04.2021, 10:30 | #2 |
abgemeldet
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Hi tove, Inhalt: Alles klar, kennt man . Habe Fragen zum Englisch: 1) sagt man INTO bed, nicht TO bed, 2) Vers 6 toent fuer mich komisch, was aber nichts heissen soll, 3) vor BUT und WHILE macht man wohl kein Komma brrr, 4) letzter Vers waer wohl TELL besser als SAY, 5) ON a thread oder BY?
LG Lorenz PS: Cool, die Reime, geht YET fuer mich gut |
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