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06.01.2007, 18:58 | #1 |
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Feethugging
'T was a sunny day in may
when, suddenly, I stepped on clay. The bee, it seemed, was not amused and then, oh dear, it really felt (as if I'd been) accused. The bee was slim, my toe was thick so I was ready for a ... bit of luck ('t was may, after all). |
06.01.2007, 20:21 | #2 |
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RE: Feethugging
tick? lick? stick? brick? nick? hick? knick?
Confused, R |
06.01.2007, 22:16 | #3 |
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Mr. Fickfuck
Danke, R, aber das muss unergänzt bleiben, wegen der zweiten Ebene der Bedeutung von "bee" und "toe" und der Stellung des Wortes "luck".
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06.01.2007, 22:25 | #4 |
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RE: Mr. Fickfuck
Ok, got it,
how clever. luck. Oh no, ***ck. Great, immaculate. Suck, R But then, it should be foothugging. Or did she sting twice? |
06.01.2007, 22:38 | #5 |
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Who said there had
only been one bee on that field of clay back then, that sunny day in may... |
06.01.2007, 22:41 | #6 |
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So they f***ed you,
as only bees could that day in may, as only bees would. (oc) Regards, R |
06.01.2007, 22:53 | #7 | |
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Not only they fucked me but I fucked them as well.
This sentence, Mr. Fuckmockery - be(e)ing able to describe the situation of me as well of that of the bee* -, shows this especially exquisitely: Zitat:
*[ignoring contents of the parentheses] |
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06.01.2007, 23:09 | #8 |
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So you fucked two bees,
I think of you well. May their sweet beings, buzz off to helll. |