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Internationale Gedichte Sämtliche nicht-deutschsprachige Gedichte. |
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01.07.2014, 05:20 | #1 |
Dabei seit: 03/2012
Ort: Vietnam Villenviertel
Alter: 59
Beiträge: 39
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heap of ashes
if you stand at the deepest depths of your soul,
you shall try in vain, use all phrases of the past as driving fire for your phoenix wings. But you will fail, fruitless you will crash and there will nothing left except a heap of ashes |
01.07.2014, 17:08 | #2 |
Dabei seit: 03/2012
Ort: Vietnam Villenviertel
Alter: 59
Beiträge: 39
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korrigierte Version
if you stand at the deepest depths of your soul,
you shall try in vain, use all phrases of the past as driving fire for your phoenix wings. But you will fail, fruitless you will crash and there will be nothing left except a heap of ashes |
01.07.2014, 17:31 | #3 |
Dabei seit: 07/2006
Ort: Mauritius, stella clavisque maris indici
Beiträge: 4.889
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Hello Isabelle Klauke,
due to the fact that your poem is in english, I write my comment in this language. I like this poem of you, it's short but gorgeous in its contents and pictures which grow n my mind while reading. Respectfully Corazon |