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23.12.2013, 01:02 | #1 |
Among this bloom
Inside thee -
adore the dwell at the aged shoreOh! This glee - lie-down in this dale; less is moreFade, indeed - behold! maddening shadows collideOne heart beat - among this bloom - I could have died |
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24.12.2013, 16:25 | #2 |
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Inside thee - adore the dwell at the aged shoreOh this glee - ignore effort 'cause less is moreFade indeed - hide in shadows which collideOne heartbeat - wide among this bloom – I could have died Wäre dankbar für Kritik/Anmerkungen! |
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