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01.06.2005, 14:23 | #1 |
I need you
das ist mein erstes fremdsprachiges gedicht. ich hab es gestern in den 9. Stunde (Latein, bähh!) verfasst und seitdem nichtmehr angerührt. Sagen wir mal, es ist noch eine "Rohfassung"...
I need you Why I´m feeling so blue Everytime I´m thinking of you? It´s difficult to understand, Sometimes life doesn´t make sense. I think of you both day and night Or anytime you´re out of my sight. Standing here on the world ends shore, I know I can´t live without you anymore. Kissing you. Missing you. You are so close but also far away And I´m praying for you to stay With me. Can´t you see? You´re a part of who I am It´s a damn Destiny, we are fancy-free, Aren´t we? So I´m closing this letter Hoping we will live some time in a better Life together, filled with joy and happyness, May you are blessed. Wie gesagt, 9.Stunde, das merkt man schon (ganz kurz vorm einschlafen*lol*) |
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01.06.2005, 15:57 | #2 |
RE: I need you
Eine Frage: sollte es nicht "may you be blessed" heissen? Des Gedicht gefällt mir sonst ganz gut...
Lilly |
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02.06.2005, 14:29 | #3 |
Ich habs nochmal etwas umgeschrieben...ein paar worte geändert und so...
I need you Why I´m feeling so blue Every time I´m thinking of you? It´s difficult to understand, Sometimes life doesn´t make sense. I think of you both day and night Or anytime you´re out of my sight. Standing here on the world ends shore, I know I can´t live without you anymore. Kissing you. Missing you. You are so close but also far away And I´m praying for you to stay With me. Can´t you see? You´re a part of who I am, Damn! We are free, Aren´t we? So I´m closing this letter Hoping we will live some time in a better Life together, filled with joy and happyness, May we will be blessed. Ich denk mal,jetz klappts auch mit der grammatik besser... |
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