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13.06.2008, 16:35 | #1 |
Dabei seit: 06/2008
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Fairytale
Allow me to tell you a fairy-tale
‘Bout a young lady that seems to be the great deal. ‘Bout the love of her or the love to her And how I try to fill her life with the love she earns. She’s beautiful, wonderful, lovely and nice She has a very big heart as you can see in her eyes A great personality and intelligence on top When she starts talkin’ and smilin’ I never want her to stop Her presence alone seems to lighten my world So I could never ever leave my eyes off of her. And by the fact that a7ll this was only the start It was a matter of time that she conquers my heart! It’s not easy for me as you can already see To write down all the facts and things she means to me It’s an incredible challenge an undoable task But I like to do it even if she didn’t ask Me to write her a song or at least a couple of lines I hope I don’t do wrong but I just never did right So I’ll try this time and hopefully write quite nice And hit a place in her heart so that she’ll later be mine. It started once in a club with some good friends around One of ‘em brought her to me so we enjoyed the sound Together from now, but soon the fellas were gone. I was alone with her and we just talked right on. We didn’t know each other but had a kind of connection Made some good conversation. No sign of any rejection. Laughed together made some jokes and changed many sights But as you can already sense there’s always a second side. She has a boy since long long time and told me ‘bout that ‘But I really feel you, damn’ is what she also said Then she realized that I was a little younger than she ‘But who cares?’ I said ‘that’s no problem for me!’ I don’t know if she really cares that much about it I think it’s her relationship which she don’t wanna quit! But what the hell am I supposed to do? Shall I let her go? My brain says yes but stomach and heart say no! So I think I’m gonna show her what love means for me I don’t know her reaction. Good or bad. We’ll see! We’ll go to an other club on Saturday night and then We’ll soon know about the told fairy-tales end. |
13.06.2008, 16:36 | #2 |
Dabei seit: 08/2007
Beiträge: 127
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Ich bin ganz ehrlich ich wollts nich ganz lesen weils doof zu lesen is ohne Absätze
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13.06.2008, 16:56 | #3 |
Dabei seit: 03/2008
Ort: Bremen
Alter: 35
Beiträge: 70
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Ging mir ehrlich auch so... magste nich einfach ma nen edit machen... damit man net immer in den Zeilen verutscht oder zerstört das irgendein wichtiges element?
SF |
13.06.2008, 17:11 | #4 |
Dabei seit: 08/2007
Beiträge: 127
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bin mal gnädig
Allow me to tell you a fairy-tale ‘Bout a young lady that seems to be the great deal. ‘Bout the love of her or the love to her And how I try to fill her life with the love she earns. She’s beautiful, wonderful, lovely and nice She has a very big heart as you can see in her eyes A great personality and intelligence on top When she starts talkin’ and smilin’ I never want her to stop Her presence alone seems to lighten my world So I could never ever leave my eyes off of her. And by the fact that a7ll this was only the start It was a matter of time that she conquers my heart! It’s not easy for me as you can already see To write down all the facts and things she means to me It’s an incredible challenge an undoable task But I like to do it even if she didn’t ask Me to write her a song or at least a couple of lines I hope I don’t do wrong but I just never did right So I’ll try this time and hopefully write quite nice And hit a place in her heart so that she’ll later be mine. It started once in a club with some good friends around One of ‘em brought her to me so we enjoyed the sound Together from now, but soon the fellas were gone. I was alone with her and we just talked right on. We didn’t know each other but had a kind of connection Made some good conversation. No sign of any rejection. Laughed together made some jokes and changed many sights But as you can already sense there’s always a second side. She has a boy since long long time and told me ‘bout that ‘But I really feel you, damn’ is what she also said Then she realized that I was a little younger than she ‘But who cares?’ I said ‘that’s no problem for me!’ I don’t know if she really cares that much about it I think it’s her relationship which she don’t wanna quit! But what the hell am I supposed to do? Shall I let her go? My brain says yes but stomach and heart say no! So I think I’m gonna show her what love means for me I don’t know her reaction. Good or bad. We’ll see! We’ll go to an other club on Saturday night and then We’ll soon know about the told fairy-tales end. ---------------------- So würd ichs vom sinn her in Absätze brechen. |
13.06.2008, 17:14 | #5 |
Dabei seit: 03/2008
Ort: Bremen
Alter: 35
Beiträge: 70
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das hatten wir auch gerade gemacht
zwar ein wenig anders aber hey Also, da ich ihn ja auch formatiert habe musste ich ihn ja lesen: Ich würde gerne den Song hören, so als Story gefällts mir schon echt gut |
13.06.2008, 17:19 | #6 |
Dabei seit: 06/2008
Beiträge: 13
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Danke!
Muss dich wohl enttäuschen.Mit aufnehmen wird's wohl eher nix.Wenn ich aufnehm möcht ich auch nen eigenen Beat machen aber davon hab ich im Moment noch nich allzu viel Ahnung.Außerdem trau ich mich auch nich so richtig.Naja wer weiß.Irgendwann vielleicht! - doppelposting entfernt von joana. - Bitte um Kommentare! Danke! |