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09.07.2020, 20:02 | #1 |
Broken record
I own a broken record
that used to play the meaning of life and to whom to pray Although it plays sound, I'm sure it's broken; lies, everything that's spoken there is no god. |
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10.07.2020, 10:45 | #2 |
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hi -
I retreated from criticizing new work in poetry but a few. your short poem however meets my philosophical criteria and reminds me in part of Oscar Salas "Rede des toten Christus vom Weltgebäude herab..." (The dead Christs speech from the building of our world) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XA138pXib10 best r |
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