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11.02.2019, 21:28 | #1 |
Will you remember?
Will you remember the blouse that I wore?
Will you remember my smell? Will you remember the conversation we had? I still love the stories you tell. Will you remember the photos we took? Will you remember my touch? Will you remember how strong your tears ran? Just because you laughed so much. Will you remember the mails that I sent? Will you remember the food? Will you remember the joke that I told? I know it wasn't that good. Will you remember the hours we spent? Will you remember the drive? Will you remember how honest I was? You know that I hate my life. Will you remember the way in that I sat? Will you remember my tears? Will you remember the moment of joy? I wanted it to last for years. |
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13.02.2019, 12:21 | #2 |
you smell good
Small is the wisdom that covers us
a god is the driver of this hippie bus we are the late tear of kingdommy news and sing in the pop mouth the latest old blues trump is a trumpet that smells like beer and in such opamism we taste like a fear and trouble is prison for various kings like she be on fire for little bird sings liberty is a couch in the city of love and in the corner we hear her swear like a dove such songs we dont play because devils believe that girls are like princes who feel every grief so worlds do not play like the music we hear and that is the reason for sophia's fear of the bed like a rose that cannot understand that boys need their perfume to help every land! |
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13.02.2019, 19:36 | #3 |
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liebe DHM -
na ja - als jemand der ein jahrzehnt in den usa lebte bringt mich dieser text nicht wirklich in einen climax, hat aber dessen ungeachtet seinen gewissen charme: Will you remember the blouse I wore? Will you remember my scent? Will you remember the conversation we had? I still love the stories you tell. ???? Will you remember the pictures we took? Will you remember my touch? Will you remember how you cried? Just because you laughed so much. Will you remember the letters I sent? Will you remember the meals we enjoyed? Will you remember the jokes I told? I know they weren't so good. ?????? Will you remember the hours we spent? Will you remember the drive? Will you remember how honest I was? You know that I hate my life. Will you remember the way I sat? Will you remember my tears? Will you remember the moment of joy? I wanted it to last for years. ich sage mal so: das wort WILL tut mir eine wenig ungerechtigkeit zum inhalt ist aber durchaus verwendbar...mangels alternative wie WOULD oder SHALL...welche dem text mehr urgenz geben würden. ich weiß es sollte reimen und mit meinen vorschlägen werfe ich das durcheinander. sry... vlg rchen |
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