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10.07.2014, 17:54 | #1 |
Chains
Chains
What if the bitter taste of memories will never fade? Could we erase the time in between? The world we knew now has a darker shade like knowing what I said this time is really what I mean. Can we find our way back tonight or will these walls just break with words you never knew where in your head? I stumble backwards, hoped you’d meet me there but what I find myself missing is long thought to be dead. It’s welcoming me with arms wide open, but I don’t know where to be Can’t open my cage, I’m trying to fly - but this time it’s hard to feel free The doors have opened just to shut in front of my eyes My heart slows down and the bridges we built start to glow while the wind starts to whistle - I don’t believe in goodbyes. |
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14.07.2014, 18:57 | #2 |
very pretty
please consider some improvements: could we erase the times... like knowing what I say now... ...or will (these) walls... (imprecise) but what I find missing... Can't open my cage to fly,... please check punctuation. LG Udo |
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