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Alt 19.02.2012, 11:39   #1
männlich Mr.Totzke14
 
Dabei seit: 02/2012
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Standard help this men

He is a loser
He has no friends
he is a drug-user
he hopes it ends
But he also has a heart
maybe he is also smart.

He also has a gun,
but is not a killer.
than he has non
He is a chiller,
on the road.


But he is not dangerous
he just wants to be respected,
like other people.
He also has a heart.
dont break it.
He wants to make a new beginning
and perhaps also winning.
So help this poor man,
is to bounce, and beginn a new life.
perhaps with a wife.


But he is not dangerous
he just wants to be respected,
like other people.
He also has a heart.
dont break it.
He wants to make a new beginning
and perhaps also winning.
So help this poor man,
is to bounce, and beginn a new life.
perhaps with a wife.
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Alt 19.02.2012, 15:25   #2
männlich El Machiko
 
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Dabei seit: 11/2008
Ort: bye the Godfarther! The God? the God!..... Father!
Alter: 40
Beiträge: 949

They tok him away
from everybody who wants to be his friend,
We know it will gettin ugly,
most cats ain´t got the Stomack to make it to the end,
When it comes to Society reletionships,
they brake
untill they forget wehre there stand,
hard to understand,
it´s suazide
when Humans like you 4 somthing
make a
mistake and it will be endless hate,
you was builden up by thausend strokes?
one punch,
and it all falls down and goes up in smoke,
4 exemple
you think a million is realy somthin?
If you want to get your sun out of work 4a lifetime
it will be more than one and a half million by 2000 in a month,
but they all expect presents from you
couse uz´a rich dude,
you can´t handel this shit, with your mother with your friends,
you can´t handel that you thought you was so smart,
but you are usless to creat somtin for the global help,
you wounder that the man you hated the most,
is just a part of the worldwide healing,
man, it´s so depressing
fuck what you thougt,
there is to much i got to left out,
all the time ervery day,
you think just becouse you can read you are involvet?
Bitsch
u just don´t even come close to know the half,
The reason why they got the order to hate you
is that just a heartless, tearless mann can realy teach fools,
after 80 years they suddenly disapear,
like goons,
Only a logic, robootik mind is strong and korrektly tuned,
you need a thank you?
than i turn away
help yourself
remember my words:
they will forget you.
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Alt 20.02.2012, 12:03   #3
männlich Mr.Totzke14
 
Dabei seit: 02/2012
Alter: 26
Beiträge: 2

Zitat:
Zitat von El Machiko Beitrag anzeigen
They tok him away
from everybody who wants to be his friend,
We know it will gettin ugly,
most cats ain´t got the Stomack to make it to the end,
When it comes to Society reletionships,
they brake
untill they forget wehre there stand,
hard to understand,
it´s suazide
when Humans like you 4 somthing
make a
mistake and it will be endless hate,
you was builden up by thausend strokes?
one punch,
and it all falls down and goes up in smoke,
4 exemple
you think a million is realy somthin?
If you want to get your sun out of work 4a lifetime
it will be more than one and a half million by 2000 in a month,
but they all expect presents from you
couse uz´a rich dude,
you can´t handel this shit, with your mother with your friends,
you can´t handel that you thought you was so smart,
but you are usless to creat somtin for the global help,
you wounder that the man you hated the most,
is just a part of the worldwide healing,
man, it´s so depressing
fuck what you thougt,
there is to much i got to left out,
all the time ervery day,
you think just becouse you can read you are involvet?
Bitsch
u just don´t even come close to know the half,
The reason why they got the order to hate you
is that just a heartless, tearless mann can realy teach fools,
after 80 years they suddenly disapear,
like goons,
Only a logic, robootik mind is strong and korrektly tuned,
you need a thank you?
than i turn away
help yourself
remember my words:
they will forget you.
warum schreibst du das???
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Alt 20.02.2012, 14:43   #4
männlich El Machiko
 
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Dabei seit: 11/2008
Ort: bye the Godfarther! The God? the God!..... Father!
Alter: 40
Beiträge: 949

Warum nicht?
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Alt 20.02.2012, 15:34   #5
weiblich Limette
 
Dabei seit: 02/2012
Alter: 31
Beiträge: 12

haha die vielen grammatik und rechtschreibfehler sind echt süß

aber für dein alter ist das okay weiter so
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