Perfect (Dreams just don't come true)

[Eva94]

All I ever wanted was just you
But now I know that dreams just don't come true

But you were perfect, perfect to me
To me you were perfect

I dreamed this dream every night and day
No matter if you were here or miles away
I dreamed this dream about us every time
I dreamed of me being yours, and you being mine

Cause you were perfect, perfect to me
To me you were perfect

I dreamed this dream every day and night
And sometimes it seemed just right
Seemed you would finally see
I dreamed this dream of you loving me

Cause you were perfect, perfect to me
To me you were perfect

I didn't care what you do
Didn't care what you say
Didn't care 'bout your friends
I just hoped someday
I'd be everything that you want

Cause you were perfect, perfect to me
To me you were perfect

But I saw you with her
Walking down the street
You were holding her hand
And I looked at my feet
I tried to smile at you
As you were looking at me
But you didn't smile back
Cos you never wanted us to be

And now I see
I was such a fool to believe
Now I see
That dreams just don't come true
Oh dreams just don't come true

But you were perfect, perfect to me
To me you were perfect.

Also wenn es jemanden interessiert, es geht um einen Jungen, in den ich mal verliebt war, der nichts von mir wissen wollte. Merkt man wahrscheinlich.
Ich glaub nich, dass es gut ist oder so, aber ich würd gern mal wissen, wie ihr des so findet, ich freue mich über jede angemessene Kritik Danke schonmal!

[Evenstar]

Also ich finde dein Lied sehr schön und ich finde es auch gut das man in über seine erlbenisse erzählt

[Black Lady]

But I saw you with her
Walking down the street
You were holding her hand
And I looked at my feet
I tried to smile at you
As you were looking at me
But you didn't smile back
Cos you never wanted us to be

Finde diesen Abschnitt sehr schön, weil (glaub ich) jeder schon einmal in solch einer Situation war.

[diversion]

find es echt gelungen!

[Dame der Feder]

Also ich finde das echt gut! Solltest du mal vieleicht nach jemandem suchen, der das vertonen kann...

[Sonja]

Hmm...
Ich weis nicht so recht.
Einerseits ist es wirklich gut, aber andererseits wirkt es auf mich ziemlich kitschig, weis auch nicht.