Rewind

[moon]

The rain is pattering
on the window sill
your voice softly flattering
common doubts to kill

The stream is pouring
in all directions
entirely scouring
our infections.

It feels like a crime
I´m losing my mind
the preceding time
I´d like to rewind.

[IsabelG]

Hi moon,

I am very impressed...really, this is so good! I like it and have to read it so often because it`s not quite as easy to understand as it looks.

I wish I would have a few better ideas for english poems but I can`t quite get the hang of it at the moment.

Really liked reading this. Want to see more

Greetings,
Isabel

[moon]

Hi Isa,

thank you for the compliment. Hopefully I´ll have further inspiration to write english poems in the near future so I could fulfill your wish for new ones. At the same time, I hope to read more of you in english cause I liked your texts as well.
Cheers,
moon