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Alt 27.07.2009, 21:51   #1
Creative
 
Dabei seit: 07/2009
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Standard Never like before

Sadly I don’t know you.
But when I look into your eyes
and see the beautiful smile of you.
I can’t forget, also if I don’t know why’s.

Maybe cause of this strange newly feeling:
Give up could the biggest mistake ever.
So I keep fighting instead of healing.
Also I won’t ever forget, never.

Because, for the first time I ask myself,
What’s right or wrong and what I have to do,
Are you prepared, face the fears of you self?
I believe its worth even it’s not true.

Leave borders behind like never before
All other minds don’t matter no more.
If you would be there. If I could be there.
Oh, if you just take care.

When I’m asleep it seems there is a way.
But dreams are just dreams, they will never stay.
So this is the only chance to dare.
Oh, if you just take care.
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Alt 29.07.2009, 10:00   #2
männlich movfaltin
 
Dabei seit: 06/2009
Ort: Glei newwa da Elegdrisch
Alter: 42
Beiträge: 130

Hi,

your English seems peppered with mistakes.

Zitat:
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Sadly I don’t know you.
But when I look into your eyes
and see the beautiful smile of you.
I can’t forget, also if I don’t know why’s.
l.1 Sadly, I don't know you.
l.3 and see trhe beautiful smile of yours
l.4 I can't forget, also if I don't know why.

Zitat:
Maybe cause of this strange newly feeling:
Give up could the biggest mistake ever.
So I keep fighting instead of healing.
Also I won’t ever forget, never.
l.1 Maybe 'cause of this strange new feeling:
l.2 (no point in that, perhaps) Giving up could be the biggest mistake ever

Zitat:
Because, for the first time I ask myself,
What’s right or wrong and what I have to do,
Are you prepared, face the fears of you self?
I believe its worth even it’s not true.
l.1 Because for the first time I'm asking myself
l.2 What's right or wrong and what am I to do (or: what do I have to do)
l.3 ...prepared to face the fears of yourself?
l.4 I believe in its worth even though (or: even if) it's not true.

Zitat:
Leave borders behind like never before
All other minds don’t matter no more.
If you would be there. If I could be there.
Oh, if you just take care.
l.3 If you were there. If I could be there.
l.4 Oh, if you just took care.

Sounds a bit too outlandish ;-)
Before posting, please make sure you speak a proper English. Well, of course almost all of the German natives here have a strong preference for peppering their lyrics with mistakes, too, even in their native language (positive exception: perry). Thus it does not seem to matter too much...

Cheers and keep on,
MovFaltin

PS: "Whatever you do, don't congratulate yourself too much or berate yourself either." (Baz Luhrmann)
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