Reflection

[UdoFrentzen]

You have a mirror
To see your face,

You have two eyes
To see your deeds,

You have reflection
To see your thoughts.

[movfaltin]

I got a polished mirror
For eyeing up my tailored guises

I shed my briefest glances
To make them meet all world's desires

But fear the light and loathe too bright a lucid self-reflection
I'd never dare to see me bare - in want of that perfection

(Just felt like it...)

Well, reflecting on your English, your poem might possibly exhibit a slight want of proficient sounding. It reads a bit German, I am afraid, even though there is obviously not a single mistake to be found.

Cheers,
Mov

[UdoFrentzen]

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