to share

[Rollce]

so many different songs
still needed to be sung,
so many words unsaid
to keep the laughter young
not many touches given
to reach the inside soul
I stay here with my basket
but suddenly you are gone.

Tears running down the face
hands grabbing only air
stay left with songs and love
and look for you to share!

[moon]

Hi Rollce,

I stay here with my basket
but suddenly you are gone.

For me that's the central statement of your text. A basket full of things to be shared, planned to serve on a whole table of common thoughts. A dinner for two, but there's nobody to share it with.

One thing: Don't know whether "only air" is grammatically correct, sounds a bit weird. But I'm not sure bout this one. Maybe the word "only" needs to be put elsewhere.

moon

[Rollce]

Hi Moon,

embracement´s grabbing only air, war eigentlich was ich danach wollte.
Leider war die Zeit für Korrektur schon wieder vorbei. nerv, nerv....
Wer ist eigentlich der Diktator hier?

LG
Rollce