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17.01.2012, 17:50
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It's so sad that you're not here
It's so sad that you're not here
Across my cheek, it runs a tear This day was bad, so full of fear It's so sad that you're not here I am alone and yes I cry I feel so bad, I wish I'd die And your love was just one lie I am alone and yes I cry And everyday I think of you Wrong man! Wrong choice! How could you do? To cure my soul I have no clue And everyday I think of you |
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18.01.2012, 18:07
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leider ein teilweise verdammt schlechtes englisch 3rd.
It is so sad you're not here Across my cheek, runs hot a tear My day was bad, so full of fear It is so sad you're not here |
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18.01.2012, 18:44
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ääähhh ja... thanks ("May day..." and punctuation...)
You didn't mention my grammar 
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18.01.2012, 19:04
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no cause its pretty much ok. hihihihihi...may day was a typo but seemed to be a freudian slip.
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18.01.2012, 21:01
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In the 2nd sentence is (more or less) a grammar mistake (by purpose...).
Anyway, there is no mistake in my lines... I am talking about spelling, grammar (apart from the one I mentioned) and punctuation. |
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18.01.2012, 23:30
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i'm talking about the properly written lyrics.
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19.01.2012, 00:57
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OK...
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