Desert

[ganter]

A dry branch of a rose-bush
is rolled to a ball in desert sand
Gliding slickly in a soft breeze
under stars, lonely and naked

Here in the realm of storytellers
myths and religions are being created
Happiness in oases under the fig tree
water of life as an eternal dream

Beyond there is the other world
yearning for poetry of loneliness
As a hermit in barren land
alone with sand-rose luck

-ganter-

[Gemini]

And now compare to your other tree poem. And you will definately see how you superseeded it by mile.

Kind regard

Gem

[ganter]

Good Morning gem,

yeah, trees and lyric, there are always a hidden connection.

Which kind of different connection you saw between the two poems?

-ganter-

[ganter]

Zitat von ganter

A dry branch of a rose-bush
is rolled to a ball in desert sand
Gliding slickly in a soft breeze
under stars, lonely and naked

Here in the realm of storytellers
myths and religions are being created
Happiness in oases under the fig tree
water of life as an eternal dream

Beyond there is the other world
yearning for poetry of loneliness
As a hermit in barren land
alone with sand-rose luck

-ganter-

Verdorrter Zweig vom Rosenstrauch
gerollt zum Ball über Wüstensand
Elegant treibend im trockenen Hauch
unter Sternen einsam und nackt

Im Reich der Geschichtenerzähler
wo Mythen und Religionen erkoren
Glück in Oasen unterm Feigenbaum
Wasser zum Leben als ewiger Traum

Jenseits der Öde besteht eine Hoffnung
mit Sehnsucht nach der Einsamkeit
Poesie als Weg zur neuen Schöpfung
Sandrosenglück zur Vollkommenheit