My Infinity

[Athariel]

My Infinity

I never wanted to go back
I never thought about the times
Have passed
I didn´t even look back
The days
Have passed
I never cried about the moments lost

But now where you´re gone
I start to think about things
I did wrong
I wish I could start from new
´Cause there are so many mistakes I did
Where does this road go to?
I think it´s a road to nowhere
I´m standing still
Am I already breaking down?
I don´t know

I can´t just go on
Because there´s just to much the time could never erase
What might have been
The reason?
My tears don´t have fall
My heart must not to be broken
But all my feelings
They don´t matter
And now I´m lost
Lost anywhere
In nowhere

[Chino]

Inhaltlich gefällt mir dein Gedicht,doch da haben sich so einige grammatikfehler und Wörter die du wahrscheinlich versucht hast aus dem deutschen ins englische zu übersetzen reingeschlichen!Oftmals geht es gut mit dem vom deutschen ins englische wortwörtlich zu uebersetzen aber oft gibts im englischen dafür andere Wörter/Begriffe.. ;-)

I never wanted to go back
I never thought about the times
Have passed
I didn´t even look back
The days
Have passed
I never cried about the moments lost

->I never thought about the time that has passed
->I never cried because of the lost moments

But now where you´re gone
I start to think about things
I did wrong
I wish I could start from new
´Cause there are so many mistakes I did
Where does this road go to?
I think it´s a road to nowhere
I´m standing still
Am I already breaking down?
I don´t know

-> But now thatyou're gone
->I start to think about the things I did wrong(Klingt vielelicht besser,du kannst das the aber auch so wie du es geschrieben hast weglassen)
->I wish I could start from the beginning
->Cause there are so many mistakes i did/I have done...würde auch gut klingen
->Where does this road lead to?Oder here does this path lead to?

I can´t just go on
Because there´s just to much the time could never erase
What might have been
The reason?
My tears don´t have fall
My heart must not to be broken
But all my feelings
They don´t matter
And now I´m lost
Lost anywhere
In nowhere

->My tears shouldn't fall oder:My tears shouldn't have fallen
->My heart shouldn't break...oder:Shouldn't have been broken from(Person)...weiß nicht genau was du da sagen willst!Das dein Herz nicht hätte brechen sollen oder das dein Herz nicht gebrochen werden soll von jemandem...?
->Lost somewhere
->In the middle of nowhere

Viele liebe Grüße
Chino

[movfaltin]

Some suggestions.
Please be aware of relative pronouns and of tense issues.

Cheers,
MovFaltin

I never wanted to go back
I never thought about the times
Have passed

I never wanted to go back
I never thought about (the) times gone by

I didn´t even look back
The days
Have passed

I did not even look back
at days gone by

I never cried about the moments lost

I never cried about the moments lost

But now where you´re gone
I start to think about things
I did wrong

But now that you are gone
I am starting to think about what
I did wrong

I wish I could start from new
´Cause there are so many mistakes I did
Where does this road go to?
I think it´s a road to nowhere
I´m standing still
Am I already breaking down?
I don´t know

I wish I could start anew
For there have been so many flaws of mine
Where does this road lead?
I think it's a road to nowhere
I am standing still
Already breaking down?
I don't know

I can´t just go on
Because there´s just to much the time could never erase
What might have been
The reason?
My tears don´t have fall
My heart must not to be broken
But all my feelings
They don´t matter
And now I´m lost
Lost anywhere
In nowhere

I can't just go on
For there is far too much time shall never efface
What might have been
Its reason?
My tears have not dropped yet
My heart is not broken yet
But all my feelings
They don't matter
And now I'm lost
Lost anywhere
In (the) nowhere

[Athariel]

Dank euch beiden, dass ihr mein doch eher schlechtes Englisch verbessert habt.
Da ich's ja nicht mehr ändern kann, werde ich das hier gleich nochmal verbessert posten.

Liebe Grüße

Athariel