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Alt 31.12.2017, 18:38   #1
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Standard Last of the demons defeated

She can't help but close her eyes.
Until the sun finally rises and the fireflies fly up into the skies
She can't help but seal her mouth.
Until silence returns and it stops being so loud
But how much does a damaged body have to take
Before he collapses under the break

I'm not bending for you and me.
(You will not silence me)
You're just a faded memory
Look at your panic, it's tragic.
You'll carry that with you all your life.
I never thought you'd survive.
I scream these words until they come true
So I will no more think of you.

A doll made out of glass
No one wants her to go into this fight and pass.
Her body is thin and weak
Just tear it down, piece by piece.
But now she wants to breathe, looking back at what she went through,
She just doesn't know what to do.

I thought my demons were almost defeated.
Until you took their side and you pulled them to freedom.
I know exactly what you're for.
To hurt and destroy and nothing more

I'm not bending for you and me.
(You will not silence me.)
You're just a faded memory
Look at your panic, it's tragic.
You'll carry that with you all your life.
I never thought you'd survive.
I scream these words until they come true
So I won't think about you anymore.
Think about you
Think about you, oh
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Alt 31.12.2017, 20:38   #2
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But how much does a damaged body have to take
Kann ich dir sagen. Es gibt einen Schmerzindex

https://books.google.at/books?id=uFj...trafen&f=false

Dein Gedicht bewirkt in mir so etwas zwischen lebendig gehäutet zu werden und lebendig verbrannt zu werden. Mit einer statistischen Abweichung von 13%

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