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03.04.2007, 10:19 | #1 |
Passionate Loveletter
"It's a new revolutionary doll! Lovely will do about everything you tell her. She will play with you, sing with you, eat with you, sleep with you; she will even talk with you! She's like a real girl and has real emotions - she can smile and weep! You can play Dress-up with Lovely, put make-up on her face, and cut her hair! It's the perfect gift for every child, even for the young teens. Buy it now!
WARNING: Not everything may apply for Lovely." My name is Lovely. Please love me. Please do not hurt me. I always start to cry. It hurts me very much, but I do not want to look ugly... I do not want to look ugly when you are with me. And even if my tears are generated, I do not want to make you sad. Please play with me, Mother. Do not leave me alone. I want to be with you. I want to feel your soft caresses. Because everytime you are with me, Mother... I feel so nice. Even if this faint sensation in my chest is not real, I want to believe that I love you. I want to believe that I am all that you need. Because I am a doll, I want to be everything to you. I want you to play with me. Talk to me, feed me. Kiss me. Please, Mother; do not abandon me. I love you so much. I love you so much that it makes me want to cry. But I do not want to cry, I am not allowed to cry, so... I will just smile and play with you. Even if it hurts. Even if I want to touch you, I musn’t. Because I am a doll, I cannot be everything to you. All I am to you is a toy. Something stupid and ugly. But you; you are the most beautiful, Mother. I will always love you. I love you so much, Mother. But you will never love me. Because I am a doll. - Bitte vorallem die Grammatik, Wortwahl, etc. kritisieren. Vielleicht werde ich Lovely in einer richtigen Kurzgeschichte benutzen =) Naja, wir werden sehen... |
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03.04.2007, 10:35 | #2 | |
Hi
hmm Zitat:
Sonst eigentlich ok, mit viel Wahrheit und Interpretationsfreiraum. Kann man sicher ne tolle Kurzgeschichte drauß basteln. Die liegen mir dann auch eher Bin mal gespannt was drauß wird. MfG Askeron |
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03.04.2007, 10:50 | #3 |
"I must not" heisst doch "Ich darf nicht"...? Also, "Auch wenn ich dich berühren will, ich darf nicht"... Oder?
Danke dass du es dir durchgelesen hast :3~ |
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