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[whoamI]

Sometimes running away is the best solution
please don't ask me any question
about the life I'm going to left behind
because dark thoughts are filling my mind

crazy dreams are persecuting me
and how I am is how I never wanted to be
the boy I love and never met in my life
this love is killing me with a knife

these people are going to hurt me bad
is that the reason why I'm so mad?
will fear never let me go,
to live the life I wanted so?

I'm wishing you the best
to forget what's the best for you
you never wanted me to last
and you always did what you wanted to do

who cares that I was crazy about you?
neither my imaginary dog nor anywho!
I'm not the apple of Wilhelm Tell,
but there are people who shoot very well.


Über Kommentare würde ich mich sehr freuen. Eine kleine Anmerkung: "anywho" bedeutet, wie ich grade herausgefunden habe, nicht "anybody" sondern "anyhow". Eigentlich müsste ich es jetzt ausbessern im Gedicht, dann geht aber der Reim verloren. Also lass ich es in der Originalversion, auch wenn es falsch ist

[Ex-Ralfchen]

warum korrist du ST5 nicht, wie ich es vorschlugo?

[whoamI]

ich verstehe immer noch nicht, wo dein Problem ist

[Ex-Gamma]

Sometimes running away is not the best solution
Please who has what you asked
There is only life you let yourself in you own back
your dark thoughts do not need your opinion

you follow yourself, you're crazy dreams are as
and how can we ever want our lives
whether girl or boy
the people you love
in life you should never get to know him
Love you kill with your knife

The people are good
You're hurt because you think badly of you
The anger has no reason
fear not and you let your emotions run wild
life is wonderful I wanted to live always as

I wish you the best
Not to mention the world, the sky
Always do what you want
rejoice in your life

We are all interested in us after we crave crazy
the animal likes to be petted in us
Bite into the apple to William Tell to hell
People just your brain can shoot very well

[whoamI]

netter versuch, aber was ist das für ein englisch?

[Ex-Gamma]

mai computer h dold mi dis sings. ai kant spik inglis langwitsch, so ai mast dell im tat oll was rong.

[whoamI]

..ich glaub, ich bin im falschen Forum. Falls das witzig sein soll, ich lache nicht. Eigentlich wollte ich ernsthaft gemeinte Kritik, aber vielleicht ist das zu dieser späten Stunde einfach zu viel verlangt.

[Soul Kitchen]

Zitat von Gamma

Sometimes running away is not the best solution
Please who has what you asked
There is only life you let yourself in you own back
your dark thoughts do not need your opinion

you follow yourself, you're crazy dreams are as
and how can we ever want our lives
whether girl or boy
the people you love
in life you should never get to know him
Love you kill with your knife

The people are good
You're hurt because you think badly of you
The anger has no reason
fear not and you let your emotions run wild
life is wonderful I wanted to live always as

I wish you the best
Not to mention the world, the sky
Always do what you want
rejoice in your life

We are all interested in us after we crave crazy
the animal likes to be petted in us
Bite into the apple to William Tell to hell
People just your brain can shoot very well

wunderschön.