** You're just liek a drug **

[Mia x3]

Haii ihr Lieben, hier noch ein Gedicht.. ;o)


You're just like a drug
[written by Mia]

There’s so much that I love about you
There’s so much that makes me smile about you
There’s so much that I think about you
There’s so much that makes me wanna die

You’re just like a drug
I’m obsessed
Can’t get away from you
And everytime I’m thinking about you
I would like to scream

Everytime I think about you
my heart is hurting
Sometimes I just wanna die

Because I think
I can’t live my life along like this
because my heart is bleeding too much
But then I think
If I'd die now
How many hearts would bleed then?

You’re just like a drug
I’m obsessed
Can’t get away from you
And everytime I’m thinking about you
I would like to scream

And at the moment
I feel like you ignore me
Do you know what I feel for you?
Or do you just have to do enough
With this lil' bit*h

I think I should get out of here
where I can be happy again
where I can forget my nightmarish obsession
where I can forget you
but sometimes I just think I wouldn't survive this

It's like a bad dream
I'm crying here
I thought it would be great
to spend time with you
but now I wish
I had never met you

You’re just like a drug
I’m obsessed
Can’t get away from you
And everytime I’m thinking about you
I would like to scream



[13/14 Jan 08]


Freu mich über Kritik, Lob und/oder Verbesserungsvorschläge ;o)

[Tamiflu]

---verschoben---

[exmaex]

hi mia,
entschuldige die nachfrage, aber welchen zweck verfolgen die "**" im titel? die stoßen mich ehrlich gesagt schon im vornherein ab, da sie selten gutes verheißen. die inhaltlich scheintote erste strophe bestätigt meine befürchtungen.
nichts für ungut, ich kann mit deinem text lyrisch nichts anfangen.

gruß maxim