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JWagner · 30.11.2023, 17:11

Once ignited you a spark of love
The waters nourished you enough
The earth received you, gave direction
Your breath has gone without a question

Your light was shining in the world
Your feelings swayed, sometimes whirled
Your mind was busy, but discrete
You stood on the ground with your both feet

Four elements, they build the pyramid
One fifth aspires into the zenith
What can that be, our final aim?
Unique, when the inner peace came!

JWagner · 02.12.2023, 11:34

You've been ignited by a spark of love
The waters nourished you enough
The earth received you, gave direction
Your breath has gone without a question

Your light was shining in the world
Your feelings swayed, sometimes whirled
Your mind was busy, but discrete
You stood on the ground with your two feet

Four elements, they build the pyramid
One fifth aspires into the zenith
What can that be, our final goal?
The inner peace of our soul

30.11.2023, 17:11	#1
JWagner Dabei seit: 10/2023 Beiträge: 219 Meine Gedichte	Quintessence Once ignited you a spark of love The waters nourished you enough The earth received you, gave direction Your breath has gone without a question Your light was shining in the world Your feelings swayed, sometimes whirled Your mind was busy, but discrete You stood on the ground with your both feet Four elements, they build the pyramid One fifth aspires into the zenith What can that be, our final aim? Unique, when the inner peace came!

02.12.2023, 11:34	#2
JWagner Dabei seit: 10/2023 Beiträge: 219 Meine Gedichte	Eine leicht überarbeitete Fassung You've been ignited by a spark of love The waters nourished you enough The earth received you, gave direction Your breath has gone without a question Your light was shining in the world Your feelings swayed, sometimes whirled Your mind was busy, but discrete You stood on the ground with your two feet Four elements, they build the pyramid One fifth aspires into the zenith What can that be, our final goal? The inner peace of our soul