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30.10.2009, 18:08 | #1 |
Who I am
I´m ugly and pretty at the same time,
I´m thirty years old, while I´m nine, I´m man and woman, father and son, I´m boy and girl, brother, sister, I´m well behaved and I´m a twister, I´m the clouds and I´m the sun. I´m neat, I´m tidy, I´m a mess, I don´t know who I am, just guess, I hate brown and I hate blue, Perhaps I´ll try, Beeing shy, But I have so much left to do. I´m special, ordinary, average, I´m homeless, poor, although I´m rich, I´m alive, I´m almost dead, There is the one thing: I´m a fool, I´m unpopular, I´m cool, I´m the end of the thread. I love the world, hate everything, I´m the queen and I´m the king, I don´t like, who I am, Although I can. Well, my life is ugly. But I am, who I am. Just me - Nobody. --lemsuzz-- |
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30.10.2009, 18:33 | #2 |
Dear lemsuzz,
nobody is a NOBODY! Your peom is very nice an very sad together. It makes me smile and a little bit sad at the same time. God Job! I hope this is written right! |
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30.10.2009, 19:50 | #3 |
Dabei seit: 10/2009
Ort: Ich wohne am kleinsten Ende Thüringens.
Alter: 33
Beiträge: 28
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Wirklich nicht schlecht geschrieben!
Erinnert mich bisschen an das Lied "You gotta be" von Des'ree.... Finds grade net bei youtube... Tolles Gedicht! |
30.10.2009, 23:03 | #4 |
Well, I often (actually always) do übertreiben a bit...
Und who in alla welt is Des´ree? Liebe Grüße lemsuzz |
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