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12.11.2020, 21:48 | #1 |
Monster
Sometimes I wonder what if I don't go home
but run away, leaving the things I own behind and follow the voice that calls me not less than a thousand miles into untamed wilderness? Like a wolf with his pack I would roam the woods, like a deer I would jump aware of lynx' looks which I'd give in the night with golden glowing eyes seeking shelter inside of my lair like the tiniest mice Whilst I lived out there my innocent life besides all beauty, one question kept dividing my mind: "I have found my natural home, I see, but who is that monster ever since guiding me?" Lurking between bushes, in the trees and the dark his body seemed misty, eyes dim like a spark though he was so blurry and always one step ahead I followed him gladly, he didn't feel like a threat One day - it was stormy - he lead me to the sea the waves were whipping but for once I felt truly free I stopped at the surf but the monster went further defying all powers and floating like a feather Then suddenly he stopped and the ocean went silent he turned around, eyes shining like a diamont from the tears he was weeping and in his piercing glance - seconds became hours the world was dancing in a trance - Beauty, silence, passion and love longing for men's roots I found in the eyes of... ...myself and it is then that I see: the monster was always a part of me and forever it will be. |
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24.11.2020, 20:52 | #2 |
Hallo NightRain,
zur Sprache an sich kann ich jetzt nichts direkt sagen, da Englisch nicht meine Muttersprache ist - aber vom Gefühl und von der Geschichte her gefällt mir das Gedicht Nur über ein paar der Reime wie z.B. woods-looks bin ich etwas gestolpert... Liebe Grüße Anna |
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26.11.2020, 20:56 | #3 |
Danke für deine Rückmeldung, AnnaWagner
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