underwater

[Traumtänzer]

and the air turns into water
makes it hard for me to breathe
and the temperature is rising
makes my blood begin to seethe

and my lips they start to tremble
try to whisper silent words
and they fly right trought the ocean
just like carefree singing birds

and the water´s slowly fading
back into my confused mind
and the sunlight shines upon me
hurts my eyes and makes me blind

insecure and hardly breathing
I am here and walk around
my heart is weak and barely beating
waiting right here to be found

[November]

Zitat von Traumtänzer

and they fly right trought the ocean

Soll "through" heißen, oder?
Aber sonst sehr schön zum Lesen!
Auch vom Rhythmus her.
LG November

[Traumtänzer]

upps, ja , soll es heißen
vielen lieben Dank!