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19.08.2017, 09:40 | #1 |
Desert
Desert stretches. No water over the horizon
Or tomorrow. Be self-sufficient. Austere retreat, where His tenets are magnified To make Him palpable. Desert expands. Green oasis gardens slit up Or deteriorate. Be self-conscious. His name does not pacify strife between men For a place of grandeur. Desert dunes move. Like corruption now here Or next there. Be self-protective. Domiciles are dug out with shovels and buckets For shielding, muddy walls. Desert dust climbs. It rolls on in yellow clouds Around the globe. Be self-critical. Billions of micro-crystals are raining, grinding To question His instructions. (Übersetzung in Philosophisches) |
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19.08.2017, 19:24 | #2 |
HIS
Good evening Udo,
I hope you did today all your “be-be-be”. Sounds like a preachers’ speech. Not easy to read and harder to understand why it should be philosophically. -ganter- |
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21.08.2017, 12:33 | #3 |
Hallo Ganter
I wanted it to be a criticism of over-expanded statements of faith, being often hollow and ineffective.
Tanks for the feedback Udo |
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