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Alt 08.08.2016, 00:24   #1
weiblich Nachtsonne
 
Dabei seit: 08/2016
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Please

I feel so sad without you.
I can´t breath.
I miss you.
My live is so shit whithout you.
I need you so mutch.
Please let me explain.
I know that it was wrong was I had done,
but my only Reason was that you´re happy.
I nerver want something other.
So please belive me, when I say I´m sorry.
I need you so much you´re one of the Reasons why I live
And there are Only 3.
I can´t live one minut longer without you.

So please, please let me explain.
I know you hate me and you´re right.
But I can´t live without you.
Please forgive me.
Everything what I had done.
And everything what I have said.

You can hate me it´s ok,
but first give me the chance to explain.
Please you know that it hurts so mutch when I know that you´re sad because of me.
It hurts so mutch to know that you cry because of what I have done.
Oh and please don´t hate him because of that what he had said.
It was all my idea
I´m the Person that you have to hate and I know it
It´s ok when you hate me, but don´t hate him.
He loves you.
Belive me this time
I know that when I have said: Belive me! It was better not to belive me.
But I´m so sorry

So please, please let me explain.
I know you hate me and you´re right.
But I can´t live without you.
Please forgive me.
Everything what I had done.
And everything what I have said.

And when I have explained you what was my Reason to do what I have done
but you don´t understand me it´s ok
I can understand it.
But I only want that you know that I´m so sorry
I nerver want that a secret stand between us
Everything that I have done was only bacause I want that you´re happy.
I want that you know that.
I want that you know alll my Resons.
My live without you is like the sun wihout the moon
All is dark and I think all time: Oh shit what have I done.
I love you and you my own little sun.
You´re my light in my darkes Night.
So please let me explain.
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Alt 08.08.2016, 10:08   #2
weiblich Ilka-Maria
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Willkommen bei Poetry und viel Spaß im Forum.

Du hast Dich an einen englischsprachigen Text gewagt, obwohl, wie es mir scheint, Du noch in der Lernphase bist. Leider sind aber auch viele Flüchtigkeitsfehler vorhanden. Ich empfehle Dir, zusätzlich zu einem Wörterbuch dieses Programm für die Überprüfung von Übersetzungen zu verwenden:

http://www.linguee.de/deutsch-englis...ce=auto&query=


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I feel so sad without you.
I can´t breathe.
I miss you.
My (live) life is so shit whithout you.
I need you so (mutch) much.
Please let me explain.
I know that it was wrong (was I had done) what I did,
but my only (Reason) reason was that you´re happy.
I (nerver) never (want) wanted something (other) else.
So please (belive) believe me, when I say I´m sorry.
I need you so much you´re one of the (Reasons) reasons why I live
And there are (Only 3) only three.
(I can´t live one minut ... longer) I can't live one more minute without you.
Es gäbe noch über den einen oder anderen Ausdruck zu streiten, auch über die Zeiten der Verben, ab da kann man wohl nicht kleinlich sein, das nehmen selbst erfahrene Stars nicht so genau.

Besten Gruß
Ilka
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