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30.09.2019, 21:56 | #1 |
Our last summer
I sit in class
The eyes of the others like painted glass Their posture is lifeless They’re moving like puppets They don’t want to be there Want crawl back into their lair They just want a good grade Their knowledge is left to fade While I’m chasing My dreams My future My past Want my knowledge to last They dream about endless weekends and bank accounts I’m angry, want to shout: We were once the same Craved knowledge, knew no shame Full of curiosity What happened was a catastrophe Punished for mistakes The world began to shake Not meant to learn but to perform Your thoughts weren’t meant to roam Always needed to be in top form Yet I love to learn Accepted the grades and how they burn Will not leave myself behind Need to feed this child inside Yearn for something that will always last Want my future to be my past I am always looking for more Walking, running until my feet are sore Can’t fit in with the others Feel like I’m undercover There’s this question they all ponder: Will this really be Our last summer? - LittleBlueDragon |
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01.10.2019, 17:48 | #2 |
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hi -
1st verse tells about the kids in a first class elementary school. very sadening. best r |
01.10.2019, 21:48 | #3 |
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That's a very smart piece of work. Especially part two. There is lot of truth in it. Enjoyed reading it.
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01.10.2019, 22:07 | #4 |
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It's great. Especially the idea of playing with time. Future and past, two things we can't change. I was fascinated by this work and I hope that we can see more of your poetry in the future.
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01.10.2019, 23:13 | #5 |
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
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02.10.2019, 03:59 | #6 |
Das gefällt mir auch. Die niedergeschriebene Stimmung ist nachfühlbar und zweifellos echt, und der Inhalt zeigt wahrlich die Sinnlosigkeit dieser altertümlichen Dressur-Politik, die leider immer noch nicht überall abgeschafft wurde.
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