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20.08.2006, 15:48 | #1 |
If...
If...
If I had a flower for every word I want to say to you, there wouldn't be enough space for trees on this earth. But I don't have a flower. If I had a grain of sand for every thought I spend on you, a desert would be between you and me. But I don't have a grain of sand. If I would do a single step for every moment of yearning for you, I would have rounded the earth several times. But I can't do a single step. If each of my tears was a diamond, I were the richest woman of all. But I don't have anymore tears. If I could put my emotions in words, they would fill the largest library in the whole world. But I don't have words. If my dreams would come true... But I don't dare to dream. |
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06.09.2006, 19:16 | #2 |
Hallo Blackfarah,
liegt vielleicht wirklich an deinem Reimstil, dass man sich so an einen Countrysong erinnert fühlt Ich finde gerade das Einfache in deinen Texten schön, weil gut verständlich. Wie gesagt, ich mag deinen Text. Wirkt sehr liebevoll und verträumt (mit dem Anklang eines unerfüllten Wunsches). Ich würde den Titel vielleicht in "What if..." abändern, finde ich persönlich stärker. Liebe Grüße, tristesse |
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