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15.08.2010, 13:59 | #1 |
Reflection
You have a mirror
To see your face, You have two eyes To see your deeds, You have reflection To see your thoughts. |
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23.08.2010, 19:28 | #2 |
I got a polished mirror
For eyeing up my tailored guises I shed my briefest glances To make them meet all world's desires But fear the light and loathe too bright a lucid self-reflection I'd never dare to see me bare - in want of that perfection (Just felt like it...) Well, reflecting on your English, your poem might possibly exhibit a slight want of proficient sounding. It reads a bit German, I am afraid, even though there is obviously not a single mistake to be found. Cheers, Mov |
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29.08.2010, 09:15 | #3 |
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