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27.07.2009, 21:51 | #1 |
Never like before
Sadly I don’t know you.
But when I look into your eyes and see the beautiful smile of you. I can’t forget, also if I don’t know why’s. Maybe cause of this strange newly feeling: Give up could the biggest mistake ever. So I keep fighting instead of healing. Also I won’t ever forget, never. Because, for the first time I ask myself, What’s right or wrong and what I have to do, Are you prepared, face the fears of you self? I believe its worth even it’s not true. Leave borders behind like never before All other minds don’t matter no more. If you would be there. If I could be there. Oh, if you just take care. When I’m asleep it seems there is a way. But dreams are just dreams, they will never stay. So this is the only chance to dare. Oh, if you just take care. |
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29.07.2009, 10:00 | #2 | ||||
Hi,
your English seems peppered with mistakes. Zitat:
l.3 and see trhe beautiful smile of yours l.4 I can't forget, also if I don't know why. Zitat:
l.2 (no point in that, perhaps) Giving up could be the biggest mistake ever Zitat:
l.2 What's right or wrong and what am I to do (or: what do I have to do) l.3 ...prepared to face the fears of yourself? l.4 I believe in its worth even though (or: even if) it's not true. Zitat:
l.4 Oh, if you just took care. Sounds a bit too outlandish ;-) Before posting, please make sure you speak a proper English. Well, of course almost all of the German natives here have a strong preference for peppering their lyrics with mistakes, too, even in their native language (positive exception: perry). Thus it does not seem to matter too much... Cheers and keep on, MovFaltin PS: "Whatever you do, don't congratulate yourself too much or berate yourself either." (Baz Luhrmann) |
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