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03.08.2017, 09:54 | #1 |
My home is my castle
Hiding Place
Flats like honeycomb nests an apartment house opposite Comforting idea, there are people like you and me I don`t see anyone but feel their aura through the walls Behind these bright big walls living human like you and me -ganter- |
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05.08.2017, 11:09 | #2 |
Home
Flats like honeycomb nests
an apartment house opposite Comforting idea there are people like you and me I don`t see anyone but feel their aura through the walls Behind these bright big walls living human like you and me The evening spread out his blanket of grey clouds I hope for all the people there they will find the rest they need -ganter- |
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06.08.2017, 17:23 | #3 |
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Its English your mother tongue, looks like.
But take speed out of the text. Flats like honeycomb nests, an apartment house opposite- Comforting idea, there are people, like you and me I don`t see anyone but feel - their aura through the walls Behind these bright big walls, living human(s)! like you and me The evening spread out his blanket of grey clouds- I hope for all the people there, they will find the rest- they need Gem |
06.08.2017, 20:38 | #4 |
My old Canadian Time
Dear Gemini,
many thanks for your valuable hints! -ganter- |
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06.08.2017, 20:42 | #5 |
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I might have some more, but the english metric is difficult. But anyway, i like your poem.
Gem |
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