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09.01.2010, 13:27 | #1 |
to share
so many different songs
still needed to be sung, so many words unsaid to keep the laughter young not many touches given to reach the inside soul I stay here with my basket but suddenly you are gone. Tears running down the face hands grabbing only air stay left with songs and love and look for you to share! |
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09.01.2010, 16:28 | #2 | |
Hi Rollce,
Zitat:
One thing: Don't know whether "only air" is grammatically correct, sounds a bit weird. But I'm not sure bout this one. Maybe the word "only" needs to be put elsewhere. moon |
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09.01.2010, 19:12 | #3 |
"only air"
Hi Moon,
embracement´s grabbing only air, war eigentlich was ich danach wollte. Leider war die Zeit für Korrektur schon wieder vorbei. nerv, nerv.... Wer ist eigentlich der Diktator hier? LG Rollce |
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