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Internationale Gedichte Sämtliche nicht-deutschsprachige Gedichte. |
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23.03.2013, 23:33 | #1 |
Please, please, please
I've made promises
more than I could keep i've given love more than I could feel and I've hurted you more than I have ever thought Now I'm standing here, i've got nothing to do cause I can't catch my heart, it's beating away from you and it's beating away from everyone I wanna give it to You say please would you love me like I do love you Oh please would you hold me like I'm holding you You say please would you love me like I do love you uh, uh, uh.. And I think I thought I just tried to be a better person But instead of this I denied my own mind And I'm standing here, i've got nothing to do cause I can't catch my heart, it's beating away from you and it's beating away from everyone I wanna give it to You say please, please, please would you love me like I do love you Oh please, please, please would you hold me like I'm holding you You say please, please, please would you love me like I do uh, uh, uh.. |
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24.03.2013, 16:20 | #2 |
Hey dein Gedicht gefällt mir echt gut. Vor allem diese Strophe:
Weiter so |
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24.03.2013, 19:20 | #3 |
Gefällt mir auch sehr gut!
Kleine Anmerkung: "I" wird immer groß geschrieben, hast du vielleicht beim abtippen übersehen |
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